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Tyrannosaurus rex, tyrant lizrd.
Yearning fo meat
Roaring like a lion
Always hunting its prey
Not scared of a fight
Nose sniffing food
Over rocks it runs
Sharp clows scratching
All the dinosaurs are scared of him
Using its tail to whack its prey
Razarblade teeth, gnashing them
Up and down
Suddenly it grabs its prey
Ripping off its skin
Every where there's blood
Xtremely dangerous dinosaur.
Hi Jepthe nice work for your Tyrnnosaurus-Rex that was cool.
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FROM JORDAN
Hi Jepthe
ReplyDeleteI liked your story about t rex and also I Liked your photo.
By aidan
Hi Jephte
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your writing about the T Rex. What a scary animal! I think maybe you need to insert the word 'eat' in your second line so it really makes sense.
Jephte for someone who is just learning English, this is really excellent work. Well done!
Dear Jephte,
ReplyDeleteWhat an exciting poem. An excellent description of a T>Rex. Well done Jephte. I am proud of you.
Love from Mrs Slade
Hi Jephte,
ReplyDeleteWow!!I am amazed
to see how you are really working well
and you have only learnt English.
And as Mr Burt said you tried you best
I think he is really right.
Keep up the fantastic work.
God Bless.
By JOshua.
Hi Jephte,
ReplyDeleteHello again.
As I was passing by your blog
It seemed as your T-rex poem was amazing.
Well keep up the good work.
God Bless.
By Joshua.
Hi Jephte!
ReplyDeleteThat was an awesome acrosstic poem. Our favourite line was :USING IT'S TAIL TO WHACK IT'S PREY. We hope you get to publish another blog soon!
Great work!
Ala and Toreka